With the game as it is currently, the sex scenes aren't great at all. The camera/viewing of it is especially atrocious. Instead of staying in place and allowing the player to actually watch or view the scene the camera shakes/moves as the girl moves whether it's riding the MC or sucking them off making it unwatchable and unappealing. Speaking of sucking them off, whenever a girl gives them a blow job, it looks like they're folding/stretching his dick like an accordion rather than their head going back and forth on it.
Also, the text and text box is a pain, like the text is going outside the text box and doesn't look pretty to look at. The art of the girls is really nice but the sex scenes are totally killing it. Another thing it seems like mc gets over the whole him vs vampire thing or just instantly believes/trust Stella far too easily.
I feel like that whole thing with his family/dad/asmodea needs to be spaced better and take longer to reveal those things about his dad rather than within 5-10 minutes of playing.
Disclosure: I’m basically a fan and have been providing error logs (along with general feedback) on Patreon for some time now.
This game’s pretty great. It starts off feeling like some typical power fantasy bs with a singular love/sex interest and a few plot holes here and there. Then, suddenly, it starts to bloom ever so slowly into what might be a helluva story. Some serious “tune in next time” shit without the social embarrassment of saying those words outloud.
I’m not gonna spoil anything. Just take the game’s Description and screenshots into account and ask yourself, “Will I enjoy this game if the fairly simple teen-ass story turns into something more than expected?”
Notables:
too many routes & paths to count; my god
i made a flowchart based on my notes and counted :x
So far, I’ve experienced 8 routes (characters) and 9 paths across them, and still have 2 characters to go. Shit’s great.
routes are very much separated, so you’ll get a drastically different experience based on the one you chose… and accidentally switch over to another without realizing it 😐 🥳
a story that’s like a 5 course meal in that you’d have to atleast try everything before you knew anything… let alone came to an accurate conclusion about it >.>
there are most definitely bad routes & paths, so enjoy seeing where your decisions lead you
Content Warning: Male gaze galore, 1 SA path , 1-2 incest paths
Regarding the complete visual rework, things like that should most definitely be posted in the Development Log (or atleast the description). Also, might wanna mention very clearly in the description that the latest versions are available on Patreon and Subscribestar.
Cool idea. I liked the animated characters but I see you're going to get rid of them, though I understand why. Hopefully there will be music and effects added as well. Good job so far, I'll keep an eye out for the finished game.
So I just noticed that I have a "WelcometoVaniar-1.0-pc" folder even though I never bought the game. Was the initial release free or what? o.O
Suggestion: Include dialogue and combat screenshots and consider a demo version.
edit: Got a question that should maybe be clarified in the description. Does the game currently have any sound effects? edit: Just bought v0.2 after finishing the second day and noticing the visual improvements. Sweet. 👍🏿
Consider the below an Errors Log. Let me know if you'd rather not receive one (regarding bugs and suggestions).
I really like the aesthetic of the game's architecture. Was not expecting the quality nor style.
I found myself forgetting this was a horny game after meeting Emma and Dakaria. Well done.
Bugs:
The eye-patched Stranger we meet has their name changed to Emma prematurely during this line: "Yes, let me guide you."
The line "Yes, I have one where I'm running through an endless maze." is spoken by the MC, but seems like it was supposed to be spoken by Dakaria.
The MC's line "I think it all depends on the person he's with and" should say "person I'm with".
The Thinking line "She looked into her eyes" probably should be "into my eyes".
The Thinking line "Dakaria's body stirred as he was penetrated" should be "as she was".
Suggestions:
Keep the animations. They're so livening. Maybe disable the loop during certain ones, though (e.g.: Emma's wave goodbye).
edit: Were any of the new (v0.2) characters supposed to appear during my playthrough? o.O I thought of Emma, searched for Emma, and talked to Dakaria. The game ended after fun in the tent, just like in v1.0. 😐
The next update will actually be a complete visual rework of the game. It won't be almost entirely animated anymore, but the image quality is much higher than before.
Emma and Dakaria are among the characters that will have more development throughout the game. So I guess that's good news for you! :D
(Thanks for pointing out the errors, I'll go fix them right away)
Regarding the animations, I decided to remove them in the visual rework because my computer simply couldn't handle such demanding requirements. It's possible that animations will return in the future when I can afford a better computer, but for now, I believe the visual quality is worth the sacrifice.
And no, none of the new characters appear in Dakaria's route. However, in the next update, there will be two new routes for Emma, so again, good news for you! :D
Thank you for this message, I really appreciate these kinds of messages. I would greatly appreciate any advice or recommendations you have to help me improve my game.
Sweet. Sad that they'll be less animations, but glad that the image quality will be much higher.
🙌🏿
Maybe mention the possibility of more animations if you can afford a better computer? 👀
Oh~, so to initiate a conversation with a character is to lock ourselves into their route and miss out on most others? Is there a limit to how many routes we can find ourselves in? How about love interests we can maintain a relationship with?
Suggestion: Lean more towards giving readers enough information to come to the conclusions the MC thinks to himself about other people. MC's (Thinking) conclusions and observations about Dakaria felt way~ too on the nose for my taste.
When I have a better computer (which is what I have planned), I could leave the computer processing the animation while I use the other one to write the story. With that, I could animate the entire game just the way I want... But I think there's still a long way to go for that.
Still, the idea is for my games to be 100% animated and maintain the best possible quality in all aspects.
Regarding the routes, they are all independent and different from each other. No path will lead you to the same response or the same place (just like real life). My idea is for all the characters to connect at some point... But I think it will take me a long time to achieve something like what I have planned. For now, the routes allow you to be alone with that particular character, unfortunately.
I'll take that advice. The truth is, I'm not entirely satisfied with how I wrote Dakaria's route. I might change some details in the future.
Sweet. Of the very few horny adult visual novels I've played, yours will stand out quite a bit for its animations and art. If it's a noticeable improvement or enhancement, I'm all for changing details. I guess just be careful going past the inevitable point of "worth the effort".
My game is and will always be free. The contribution is optional if you want, although I think the page is a bit confusing. If you want, I can refund your money, no problem :)
If you say so, then I think I should create a demo version, I hadn't thought about it.
Currently, the game doesn't have any sound, but in future updates, I plan to hire some artists to include music in the game.
Oh no, I enjoyed it enough to want to support it, so it's all good. I was just confused about the versions since I've been always buying "Name your price" games for some time now.
So~ was I supposed to know that this was only in Spanish or what? :x edit: Just found the language options in the preferences menu. Should probably warn people about this so they don't get confused.
Hello! In the next update there will be a selector at the beginning of the game to change the language as soon as it is launched. Thank you very much for your comment, I really appreciate your help.
Hello! I'm glad you liked the game, get ready because there will be an update soon. I hope to keep a friendly community with this game, it was my wish from the beginning :D
Like the proof of concept. Definitely look forward to further chapters. If I could make one observation, save the animations for pivotal scenes and combat. Other than that I wish you luck with your story moving forward,
Thank you so much! About the animations, I agree with you, but I think if I try to fully animate my game it will be at least a bit different from the rest. What's your opinion about it?
Ultimately it is your vision and we as players/readers are just along for the ride. My honest opinion is just tell your story the way you intended to tell it and thanks for sharing.
What I mean is that you need some more exquisite images on this page to get the attention of visitors. But I realize that you are just getting started and this is an over-the-top and unrealistic suggestion.
Hahaha don't worry, I'm not very good with English either. Soon I will try to make some good images, you are absolutely right about it. Thank you very much for the advice, I will keep it in mind :D
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With the game as it is currently, the sex scenes aren't great at all. The camera/viewing of it is especially atrocious. Instead of staying in place and allowing the player to actually watch or view the scene the camera shakes/moves as the girl moves whether it's riding the MC or sucking them off making it unwatchable and unappealing. Speaking of sucking them off, whenever a girl gives them a blow job, it looks like they're folding/stretching his dick like an accordion rather than their head going back and forth on it.
Also, the text and text box is a pain, like the text is going outside the text box and doesn't look pretty to look at. The art of the girls is really nice but the sex scenes are totally killing it. Another thing it seems like mc gets over the whole him vs vampire thing or just instantly believes/trust Stella far too easily.
I feel like that whole thing with his family/dad/asmodea needs to be spaced better and take longer to reveal those things about his dad rather than within 5-10 minutes of playing.
futa and ntr, this game is destined to fail
v0.3.2 (2023/07/13) Review:
(very small spoilers)
Disclosure: I’m basically a fan and have been providing error logs (along with general feedback) on Patreon for some time now.
This game’s pretty great. It starts off feeling like some typical power fantasy bs with a singular love/sex interest and a few plot holes here and there. Then, suddenly, it starts to bloom ever so slowly into what might be a helluva story. Some serious “tune in next time” shit without the social embarrassment of saying those words outloud.
I’m not gonna spoil anything. Just take the game’s Description and screenshots into account and ask yourself, “Will I enjoy this game if the fairly simple teen-ass story turns into something more than expected?”
Notables:
Content Warning: Male gaze galore, 1 SA path , 1-2 incest paths
Yes its updated ty
android ver?
It will be ready in a few minutes! :D
will there be a Mac version?
I'm going to find out how to do it, as soon as it's ready I'll let you know :D
As the cuck f95 mods delete any ntr comments against them, I answer please add NTR to tags. Thanks.
Regarding the complete visual rework, things like that should most definitely be posted in the Development Log (or atleast the description).
Also, might wanna mention very clearly in the description that the latest versions are available on Patreon and Subscribestar.
Both of these things are selling points.
Thanks friend! You are the best!
Cool idea. I liked the animated characters but I see you're going to get rid of them, though I understand why. Hopefully there will be music and effects added as well. Good job so far, I'll keep an eye out for the finished game.
So I just noticed that I have a "WelcometoVaniar-1.0-pc" folder even though I never bought the game. Was the initial release free or what? o.O
Suggestion: Include dialogue and combat screenshots
and consider a demo version.edit: Got a question that should maybe be clarified in the description. Does the game currently have any sound effects?
edit: Just bought v0.2 after finishing the second day and noticing the visual improvements. Sweet. 👍🏿
Consider the below an Errors Log. Let me know if you'd rather not receive one (regarding bugs and suggestions).
I really like the aesthetic of the game's architecture. Was not expecting the quality nor style.
I found myself forgetting this was a horny game after meeting Emma and Dakaria. Well done.
Bugs:
The eye-patched Stranger we meet has their name changed to Emma prematurely during this line: "Yes, let me guide you."
The line "Yes, I have one where I'm running through an endless maze." is spoken by the MC, but seems like it was supposed to be spoken by Dakaria.
The MC's line "I think it all depends on the person he's with and" should say "person I'm with".
The Thinking line "She looked into her eyes" probably should be "into my eyes".
The Thinking line "Dakaria's body stirred as he was penetrated" should be "as she was".
Suggestions:
Keep the animations. They're so livening. Maybe disable the loop during certain ones, though (e.g.: Emma's wave goodbye).
edit: Were any of the new (v0.2) characters supposed to appear during my playthrough? o.O I thought of Emma, searched for Emma, and talked to Dakaria. The game ended after fun in the tent, just like in v1.0. 😐
The next update will actually be a complete visual rework of the game. It won't be almost entirely animated anymore, but the image quality is much higher than before.
Emma and Dakaria are among the characters that will have more development throughout the game. So I guess that's good news for you! :D
(Thanks for pointing out the errors, I'll go fix them right away)
Regarding the animations, I decided to remove them in the visual rework because my computer simply couldn't handle such demanding requirements. It's possible that animations will return in the future when I can afford a better computer, but for now, I believe the visual quality is worth the sacrifice.
And no, none of the new characters appear in Dakaria's route. However, in the next update, there will be two new routes for Emma, so again, good news for you! :D
Thank you for this message, I really appreciate these kinds of messages. I would greatly appreciate any advice or recommendations you have to help me improve my game.
Sweet.
Sad that they'll be less animations, but glad that the image quality will be much higher.
🙌🏿
Maybe mention the possibility of more animations if you can afford a better computer? 👀
Oh~, so to initiate a conversation with a character is to lock ourselves into their route and miss out on most others? Is there a limit to how many routes we can find ourselves in? How about love interests we can maintain a relationship with?
Suggestion: Lean more towards giving readers enough information to come to the conclusions the MC thinks to himself about other people. MC's (Thinking) conclusions and observations about Dakaria felt way~ too on the nose for my taste.
When I have a better computer (which is what I have planned), I could leave the computer processing the animation while I use the other one to write the story. With that, I could animate the entire game just the way I want... But I think there's still a long way to go for that.
Still, the idea is for my games to be 100% animated and maintain the best possible quality in all aspects.
Regarding the routes, they are all independent and different from each other. No path will lead you to the same response or the same place (just like real life). My idea is for all the characters to connect at some point... But I think it will take me a long time to achieve something like what I have planned. For now, the routes allow you to be alone with that particular character, unfortunately.
I'll take that advice. The truth is, I'm not entirely satisfied with how I wrote Dakaria's route. I might change some details in the future.
Sweet.
Of the very few
hornyadult visual novels I've played, yours will stand out quite a bit for its animations and art.If it's a noticeable improvement or enhancement, I'm all for changing details. I guess just be careful going past the inevitable point of "worth the effort".
Hi!
My game is and will always be free. The contribution is optional if you want, although I think the page is a bit confusing. If you want, I can refund your money, no problem :)
If you say so, then I think I should create a demo version, I hadn't thought about it.
Currently, the game doesn't have any sound, but in future updates, I plan to hire some artists to include music in the game.
Oh no, I enjoyed it enough to want to support it, so it's all good. I was just confused about the versions since I've been always buying "Name your price" games for some time now.
hello, will there be a Mac option in the future? thanks
Hello! Yes, I plan to release a version for Mac in the future :D
So~ was I supposed to know that this was only in Spanish or what? :x
edit: Just found the language options in the preferences menu. Should probably warn people about this so they don't get confused.
Hello! In the next update there will be a selector at the beginning of the game to change the language as soon as it is launched. Thank you very much for your comment, I really appreciate your help.
love this game, and this is one of the most positive comment sections ive ever seen on her
Hello! I'm glad you liked the game, get ready because there will be an update soon. I hope to keep a friendly community with this game, it was my wish from the beginning :D
Like the proof of concept. Definitely look forward to further chapters. If I could make one observation, save the animations for pivotal scenes and combat. Other than that I wish you luck with your story moving forward,
Thank you so much! About the animations, I agree with you, but I think if I try to fully animate my game it will be at least a bit different from the rest. What's your opinion about it?
Ultimately it is your vision and we as players/readers are just along for the ride. My honest opinion is just tell your story the way you intended to tell it and thanks for sharing.
I think you need a more attractive name of VN and some pictures.
Thanks for the comment! A more attractive name? I'll think about it, I think you're right. About adding more images, what exactly do you mean?
Sorry for my bad English.
What I mean is that you need some more exquisite images on this page to get the attention of visitors. But I realize that you are just getting started and this is an over-the-top and unrealistic suggestion.
Please ignore it temporarily.
Hahaha don't worry, I'm not very good with English either. Soon I will try to make some good images, you are absolutely right about it. Thank you very much for the advice, I will keep it in mind :D
put pateron link in game description
Thanks for the comment! I'm going to correct that error right now :D
Also will there be android version in future
It will be ready in no time! :D